Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Group Task - Evaluation.

1. In what ways does your media product develop forms and conventions of a real media product?

How did we Use Conventions?

To make a successful music video we had to stick to some of the major conventions of a music video that we researched before we began. 


Firstly the main convention we stuck to was containing elements of both narrative and performance throughout the video, this allows the audience to easily identify the artist but also get drawn into the story of the video; thus giving the video its USP.  








We started the video by showing the artists name and name of the song on screen, again this is a very modern convention which has been used by many large artists including, Miley Cyrus, Tom Odell and One Direction. Again this a way of creating a link between the video and the artist.   


  
We stuck to conventions by using a variety of different camera shots and angles, this linked with our narrative made our music video flow better and allowed it be understood more easily by the audience. We learnt through our research that modern music videos needed to be easy to understand by a large audience, compared to postmodern music videos. 











Using our research into narrative theory and various theorists we decided to use some of their theories into our music video. Most noticeably Todorov's theory. Todorov suggested that at the start of a narrative text there was an equilibrium (The star with his girlfriend) then a disequilibrium (Him breaking up with his girlfriend) then a new equilibrium in the end (Him with his new girlfriend.) We achieved this by using a combination of various reaction shots and various shots which express our narrative.



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How did we Challenge Conventions?

Firstly we planned to include normal looking people as the actors for my video. Conventionally the actors in music videos are typically are extremely attractive people, this is often used as a USP for the video, for example most popular rap videos, and some of our genre, like the male character in Taylor Swifts, Love Story.
 

To boost the effect that we decided to include we also decided to let our actors wear only minimal and neutral make-up throughout the video, except for "the new girlfriend." the idea behind her make-up came from the idea that society would view her greater because of the fact she had quite clearly made an effort, showing she would be more committed to Daniel in their new relationship, responses to our video show that viewers feel like he is more suited to the new girl, compared to his ex in the video.


Another convention we challenged for music videos of our genre is the amount of shot locations we used. Most videos of an indie acoustic genre have quite a small Mise en scene, for example only a few like Tom Odell's Another Love or even just have one main location like Jake Bugg's Broken or Asaf Avidan's Reckoning Song. The large amount of Shot locations allowed us to positively express our narrative and was overall successful.







In many ways our music video greatly challenges conventions, these examples were all intentional and were planned during our initial ideas stage of planning.
The next thing we used to push challenge conventions for our video is by contrasting the feelings you got from the colours used with the feelings with the feelings of the character. For example even though you could see the pain of the character throughout the video through the use of narrative the bright colours shown throughout give you an almost sense of hope for the character, it also shows that life's always bright no matter how dark it seems. This makes it a socially relevant with the growing rate of depression in teenagers in modern society. 






3. What have you learned from your Audience feedback?

We conducted a small group of media students who watched our music video and then we filmed their reactions. The audience consisted of a variety of different people who each have different genre preferences and who some of wouldn't specifically favour our genre. We conducted this test to see if our music video could be enjoyed by a passive audience



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pq_1s_4H-HU&feature=youtu.be



Using my Polldaddy survey we have been able to collect some audience feedback to see what my target audience thought of the music video, if they enjoyed it and what they might change if they could.
We asked if the audience liked the way we presented the artist and how they might change this if they didn't. The response which we thought was helpful was that the artist looks different throughout the video and that a more consistent appearance would be an improvement. We fully agree with this comment as when we have looked back through the video there are several different outfits used, although some were to represent a change in time the change isn't dramatic enough for this to be clear.









Another response was that the audience wanted the artist to look more passionate about the song and the story behind it.
In response to the question on locations some said they would prefer there to be less filming indoors as the bedroom wasn't extremely realistic for a male teenagers bedroom and that the locations should be made to look more meaningful- for example, more flashbacks of him there with his 'ex' to show the locations have meaning to him.

The costume was described as suitable for the story and it matched the teenagers character, the clothes are up to date and fashionable.
We asked what the audience disliked about the video, the main response we collected what that they didn't like to see the teddy being burned but we think this portrayed the feeling of sadness in the video, one of the responses commented on the shaky filming, although they said they disliked this it was an intentional filming technique, we used it on the shot of the fire at the bridge of the song, the music and singing sounds raw and so we think the video matches the music well.


Finally we asked what my audience liked about the video, many of the responses were that they enjoyed watching the video because it told a story with or without the music, another  comment was on the editing technique, they thought the editing was good in the video, although we didn't use a lot of filters or transitions the simple editing has proved to be quite successful.

4. How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?

We used a variety of different Media technologies during the construction phase of our music video, probably the most in this phase compared to the rest of them. 

The main digital technologies we used was obviously a combination of film and Final Cut Pro. We filmed using a canon dslr camera which gave us a good quality picture as well as saved the film as a format we could directly upload onto Final Cut Pro. 

Final Cut Pro allowed me to easily manipulate the clips we had filmed and turn them into the final video. The benefit of using software like this was that we could see each separate clip at the same time on the screen. Something that we managed to perfect on my own was timing of each clip. To do this we used a series of placeholders which corresponded to the length of each shot and timing of the song.




As well as using this software we also used various others. Such as google chrome, this allowed us to update the blog we shared as well as communicate with each other for free using stoical networking sites like Facebook. We also used sites such as YouTube to release drafts of our music video and to also watch guides if we ever didn't know how to do anything of Final Cut Pro.



























Monday, 24 February 2014

ConorDrury 7200, Molly Rickards 7111 - Letting Go - Daniel Shaw (Jay Tyrer)



"Please Like and Comment reviews and constructive criticism on the Youtube video, we would like to thank everyone involved in the planning, production and editing of the video, especially artist Jay Tyrer for allowing us to use his original song."
                       
 - Conor Drury -

Sunday, 23 February 2014

ConorDrury 7200 Molly Rickards - Final Combined Ancillary




To improve my advert that I designed to go in various magazines, such as "Q" and "NME," I included the front cover from our final digipak. This will help to create a brand for the artist as the shot used in  background of the advertisement is a shot from the video. This will help to brand the artist as if the audience has only seen the music video they will be able to identify it. We also changed the colour scheme of the background to create synergy between this and the digipak. 
We added a comment from a Music Magazine in the corner to increase branding quality and make it look more authentic. 




To create our final combined Digipak we selected the best elements from each of our final Digipaks and combined them into one. Overall we decided to chose my colour scheme and secondary imagery and Molly's front cover image and ideas about including information about the artist. Overall this Digipak looks a lot more professional and looks aesthetically like it could be found on the shelves at HMV.

Saturday, 8 February 2014

ConorDrury 7200 - Final Merch Ideas


Whilst doing some research into existing selling points for bands I decided to create some t-shirts for my artist using the typographic experiments I created earlier. Band tees are a great way for artist to get well known in the world. Many large artists and bands have tee shirts including Ed Sheeran and One Direction have tee shirts which millions of their fans buy and wear so creating tee shirts for Daniel would be a good selling point. The typography I used for these tee shirts is different to the ones I used on my Album and video. I did this as the font used for those two outcomes was fairly plain and by making something more contemporary and stylistic teenagers are more likely to buy them.

Friday, 7 February 2014

ConorDrury 7200 - Final Digipak and Advert







ConorDrury 7200 - Advert Draft 2

I eventually decided on changing the image to a still from my music video. I chose this image as the artist was primarily the only thing that could be focused on. I then used the font to balance out the image so it wasn't completely one sided. I then gave some information about the artist using the same font I used for my digipak and video which created synergy between the three outcomes. I feel like the middle line of text makes the poster feel unbalanced so i've decided to move the positioning of it.

I also did some experimentation with typography, this hand written font would be great for t-shirts and other clothing designs as the rushed handwritten font is very trendy for teenagers in the current society.

ConorDrury 7200 - Advert Draft

I decided to create an advert that could be used in a music magazine or as a separate poster for my artist as well as a digipak, Posters are a great way of getting your artist know by a large group of people, as well as giving information about album releases and other key information about the artist. I decided to experiment in a style similar to my digipak however I feel this image looks fairly plain and washed out. I'll either need to change the font and maybe give them a shadow or change the background image and work into using colour.

ConorDrury 7200 - Digipak Draft 4


I developed my last draft to create this outcome, I believe this digipak is closer to my final outcome as it looks more professional and links well with the music video because of the various screenshots iv'e used from the video however i've used enough different images to make it obvious this isn't just a single cover. I also added some smaller details to make the album look more realistic. The only thing i need to change is to make the website lower on the backside of the cover. This will spread the typography out and make it feel more full and less rushed.

Wednesday, 5 February 2014

Molly Rickards 7111- Digipak Draft


Some students who are in our target audience have suggested some ways to improve the digipak. Many suggested I should add a small biography to make the consumer feel like they know more about this new artist. I also need to move the barcode to the right of the back cover and will make sure all of the panels use the same font.
On the top left panel the lyrics may need moving to the left slightly to make sure they're not blocking his head on the photograph.

Wednesday, 29 January 2014

ConorDrury 7200 - Ancillary Draft 3


I decided to lighten the colour of my spines of my Digipak, this matched the rest of the album better than before. To finish these i'll include the "Ill Systems" logo we created earlier in the project.

Conor Drury 7200 - Ancillary Draft 2

I decided to change the picture I used for my lyrics sheet to something more plain which allowed my lyrics to be more easily seen. I still stuck to my house style but decided not to include red as it made the whole thing feel more cluttered, now I have to change the spines to make them look more aesthetically pleasing.








Friday, 24 January 2014

ConorDrury 7200 - Ancillary Draft

After deciding on my Black, White and Red colour scheme I decided to begin creating my actual digipak on Photoshop. I began by taking various screen shots from our actual video and from extra footage and photographs we took during filming. This allowed my digipak to be easily identified if the video had been seen but the artist was unknown.

I still need to change the font sizes and placement of the lyrics. I also need to edit the spine to make it more aesthetically pleasing as I feel its rather plain and "GCSE" standard at the moment.


Monday, 13 January 2014

ConorDrury 7200 - Digipak Planning


My initial idea was to focus on creating my album using 3d elements, I would do this by layering slightly transparent red typography over blue. This would create a retro original feel to the album cover whilst also linking it to the indie genre.
I created some trial outcomes using this style but felt it wouldn't match the overall sad feel of the music video we created.














For my next Drafts I have decided to focus on using black and white. Again this will link to the retro style of the indie genre and also to other album covers of similar artists such as Ed Sheeran's series of artworks for his single releases.
To push the boundaries of my Digipak I have decided to include A subtle use of slightly transparent red, as well as looking aesthetically pleasing the fading red could symbolise the love he has lost which resulted in him writing his this album.

Monday, 6 January 2014

Molly Rickards (7111) - Digipak Plan



On each of the panels there will be an image of the artist or guitar, this ensures the look of the artist is known. On the back of the digipak I will include a list of the song titles and a layered image possibly including a shot from the music video to create a link between the video, song and case. Each of the images will be different I will add a subtle sepia filter to create the right colour and I will use the same font we used as the title on the music video, again to create the link. 



Each of the panels will have either a caption or a quote from the song, the panel holding the booklet will have the same image on both the booklet and the case so when the book is there the image isn't lost. The CD will also have an image on it along with the title of the album and the name of the artist.
I want the whole pack to have a theme and I don't want it to look to busy, when I have put the photographs together I will see how well it works and I will look at how I can create a more abstract effect if needed.
I may also consider including some website addresses to promote the singers websites or some information about the new artist.

Molly Rickards(7111) - Digipak plan of layout


In many digipaks a small booklet is included containing lyrics to the songs on the album, this will be something I might include as it will also help to promote the songs of this new artist and will give me more opportunity to promote the look of the new artist in the digipak.




There are some different layouts I could use to create my digipak, I think the layout with 3 panels will make the item more interactive and will have more space for me to include images of the artist.




I will use a picture of my artist on the front of the case, along with his name and the name of the album. 
On the back of the case I will put a list of the songs on the CD and another photograph, possibly of his guitar to help portray the genre of these songs. I will use quite a muted colour code on the digipak, such as greens and browns similar to the colours we used in the music video.